Welcome to Project ROL, an online graphic novel. Please note that the story contains Biblical references that are NOT intended to offend any particular religious groups or persons.
| by Sitrel @ 28 March 2008 03:47 pm |
| I love the page, it's so, Cool and retro! |
| by Kix @ 28 March 2008 04:18 pm |
| I love the colors. It's not overkill at all. |
| by Nonesuch @ 28 March 2008 10:45 pm |
| The word "Resetted" is seriously NOT A WORD. It should be "...with this, you have merely reset the world again." I scoff at your lacking knowledge of English. |
| by Treucko @ 29 March 2008 02:06 am |
| come one it makes god sound more childish.
i really love the colors. |
| by Xel @ 29 March 2008 05:51 am |
| I really hope "your lacking knowledge" was a joke. Commonly you say, "your lack of knowledge of the English language" or something like that. While you can say "lacking" I suppose, it doesn't quite work... no one says it, making it wrong. ^_^ (Cuz that's how language works, folks!)
But I like the new pages ^^ though I'm not positive I know what they mean yet though... |
| by Jason @ 29 March 2008 12:00 pm |
| Ha, I honestly didn't know. Oh well, I've already admitted that English isn't my first language or my strongest subject XD
I'll fix up the resetted to reset later. Thanks for the correction. |
| by Hortaux @ 29 March 2008 08:34 pm |
| Uncommonly good page. I enjoy the bright colors; since there is a sort of blur effect over them, the brightness looks fine. Also, the differences in font for narration/dialog are effective. 8D |
| by Jason @ 29 March 2008 08:51 pm |
| Thanks for the comment. It's not so much the brightness of the colors that I disliked...it's the fact that there is color. I would think that the people of this world has more to worry about than the paint of the buildings.
Nevertheless, I corrected the grammar of this page. If there's anything else, speak up (unless it's an artistic problem...in which case I'm not going to bother redrawing anything) |
| by pretty_blossom @ 30 March 2008 12:35 pm |
| I like the look of this page, although I wonder what's the connection. As a picture it's lovely, as a content page, not so much.
Also the new page looks all small and thin on my wide screen. Have mercy on those of us who advanced beyond 600x800 resolution... i like the new banner, but it looks all blurry and needs more focus imo. About the worms - ooohh, tribbles... super cool |
| by Pickleweasel @ 30 March 2008 05:17 pm |
| "I would think that the people of this world has more to worry about than the paint of the buildings."
I didn't interpret that as the actual color of the buildings, but more of an abstraction symbolizing the world restarting. And it looks damn good for that. You can just pretend that's what you were trying to do if you like the idea XD |
| by Jason @ 30 March 2008 08:08 pm |
| ...Hmm... You are absolutely correct, pretty_blossom. Thus, I'm now using the same technique as on the rol-comic site and gave it the "illusion" of being wider for widescreen users. Below is an updated version of the layout. http://www.projectrol.com/junk/pre-layout-4.html As for what this page has to do with anything content-wise...it's as Pickleweasel stated; the sun rising is symbolism for the world being reset. |
| by Meenakshi Wali @ 31 March 2008 01:48 am |
| i like the new banner, but it looks all blurry and needs more focus imo. You can just pretend that's what you were trying to do if you like the idea XD |
| by Quill @ 31 March 2008 06:27 am |
| Yet again, I love how you tie in the story with the past with these two pages like you did with 'God gave him life' |
| by Pickleweasel @ 31 March 2008 06:12 pm |
| Yay! I was right!
Heh, sorry. Also, I like the power of these pages with simple statements that narrate but not excessively. |
| by newguy @ 31 March 2008 09:31 pm |
| Please don't change the layout. The color scheme is so... clashing. Personally I think redrawing the "angel" to change the weapon was a bad idea too, it made the proportions and lineart weird. I really like the layout you have now. |
| by pretty_blossom @ 02 April 2008 10:47 am |
| bright colors on the new layout... willing to give it a go for a while. I prefer dark blue and green, but that's just me - aquatic... |
| by Jason @ 02 April 2008 09:00 pm |
| @newguy: Sorry, but there wil be a new layout...and now that I've placed so much effort into this newer one, this version is probably going to be (at least) the basis for the new layout. @pretty_blossom: Yes, the colors are brighter...but in my opinion it's easier to read dark text on bright backgrounds than vice versa. Especially my longer posts - I don't know how all of you manage to read paragraphs of text every time I update. I mean, it hurts my eyes if I attempt to proof-read it. |
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