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| by Sophia @ 23 March 2008 11:06 pm |
| ... is she showing a SLIGHT form of caring/compassion? If so, wow... I wasn't sure she had it in her... |
| by Sophia @ 23 March 2008 11:09 pm |
| (I love how you manged to make him look worried, shocked, and overwhelmed all in the same picture...) |
| by Jason @ 24 March 2008 01:39 am |
| (I love how you think I was trying to make him look worried, shocked, and overwhelmed in the same picture...)
I believe you are thinking too highly of me =P |
| by Pickleweasel @ 24 March 2008 07:21 am |
| Sophia - I think she is. But I don't find it too surprising, she does have depth to her... I mean she -is- "God" n.n And we've seen her look hurt before when he forgot her again...
And I do think you got Haru's emotions down well there too. Oh, right. Hi Jason *waves* I read all of the old generations and the current one over the last few weeks and have greatly enjoyed the process... I'm looking forward to seeing where you end up going this time! Your art has vastly improved and your characterization/dialogue are also getting better. I'm also glad you're able to let the harmful comments that some are making roll off your back, it's commendable. Anyway, new reader here saying thanks for comicking and sharing with us! |
| by Xel @ 24 March 2008 09:11 am |
| Ooo, I really like her expression in that last panel...very interesting. |
| by pretty_blossom @ 24 March 2008 11:49 am |
| She does look sad on the 3rd panel, then mischivous. She looks like she's going to lie to him.
Haru looks confused and cute - it's a good page all round. Even the 1st panel looks nice, although you've left out the garbage again. This city has an excellent cleaning service, wish where I lived has something like that. |
| by Warthog @ 24 March 2008 05:17 pm |
| Don't woory too much about negativity. I'm loving to see where you are going with this. (I've not read any of your previous storylines deliberatly).
Nice to see original thinking Regards Keith |
| by Jason @ 24 March 2008 06:53 pm |
| Oops. I forgot to add the trash in the city background again. Jeez, I told myself I was going to have trash last time @_@ Personally, I found God's expression on the last panel to be oddly attractive. It's like a dangerous and cunning smile. On the other hand, unlike the comments made above, I think I could have done better with Haru. But truthfully, art-wise, this is one of my better pages overall as mentioned by pretty_blossom. |
| by Sitrel @ 24 March 2008 07:14 pm |
| I agree, this really is one of the better pages you have made/coloured/drawn (Paraphrase), keep up hte good work, and, sorry about the swearing on the last page. hehe, |
| by warped religion @ 24 March 2008 07:50 pm |
| i to am sorry bout the swearing, but people like that really annoy me and i have very violent tendencies ^.^.
one of the best pages yet, your artwork is definitely better than mine, which is probably why my comics are stick comics ^.^ because i can, Rale Mirodin |
| by Wicked @ 25 March 2008 03:57 pm |
| Ah. Its all excelent, really - the hair is improving and so are the faces; not to mention the colouring is great. The first thing I thought when I looked at that first panel was wow his hair looks a lot better then normal. And as I glanced around I saw other things that grabbed my interest. Your improvements are excelent! |
| by justin @ 25 March 2008 06:26 pm |
| peace. let it not be overrated, good job with the comic page today, jason, even if the lack of garbage in it wasn't to your taste, lol. |
| by Alien_Cicada @ 27 March 2008 10:51 am |
| I like the background in panel 1, even if the perspective is a little off. I think "God" looks a little strange in the last panel.
Regarding the people who entered a pissing contest last time, I think it's really rather sad. Either your comic is read by children, or this explains more than it should about politics. |
| by treucko @ 28 March 2008 01:48 pm |
| looks like everything has already been said.
P.S. mental notes dont last long next time you want to make sure you do something put up a sign some where |
| by Treucko @ 28 March 2008 01:52 pm |
| You'd think she would get sick of being interupted even by 'herself'
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