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| by Addidom @ 11 March 2008 05:12 am |
| Damn those rare Arizonian insects!
They just turn up out of the blue just to ruin your day! |
| by bbr @ 11 March 2008 07:04 am |
| That was fast ! |
| by pretty_blossom @ 11 March 2008 10:21 am |
| So Adam/Haru finally got up from the bed - good for him. Thought it would take a bit longer, but now's as good a time as any. 3rd panel is wrong - no bed in site, and there should be those funky things in the background.
As for the faces - not bad - I didn't notice any problems at first glance and still don't see them after inspection. |
| by Quill @ 11 March 2008 02:27 pm |
| There is only one thing about this page that is a bit wrong. The nose on Haru(ko. I won't stop calling him that XD) in the last panel is either a) too big or b) too far on the right on his face. |
| by byrdo @ 11 March 2008 03:20 pm |
| is it 'Haru' since that means 'spring' in japanese? like, the season? i think i'll send in some kanji art.... (btw, i think haruko would is a girl's name) |
| by byrdo @ 11 March 2008 04:02 pm |
| speaking of which, is there a fan section on your site anyways? i just noticed. |
| by Me @ 11 March 2008 07:01 pm |
| Yazu's legs are kinda awkward. |
| by Sitrel @ 11 March 2008 08:46 pm |
| Despite what you or others say I really like this page, to me this particular page seems to MAKE me love it, so, no really important comments,
Sorry, |
| by Alien Cicada @ 12 March 2008 08:45 pm |
| I like Yasu's pose, and I think the art is fairly good. However, I sincerely doubt that someone would stand like that. Keep it up. |
| by Jason @ 13 March 2008 12:13 pm |
| Thanks for the comments, everyone. Haruko is both a male and female name. The "pose" is really a result of me playing around with camera angles, so I understand so please ignore the awkwardness of it. There will be a fan section set up later on the site.
Ah, I already finished the next page (I'm working fast this wek @_@), but I don't intend to release it until Friday so that most people can glance at this page before I move on. |
| by byrdo @ 13 March 2008 05:01 pm |
| actually the only thing wrong with the funny angle is that her chest is sticking out too much. Otherwise it's pretty good. |
| by treucko @ 14 March 2008 03:42 pm |
| Two things
1) in the third panle yasus legs look too far apart like doing the splits 2) Same pannle shes got an expression we'd exspect to see on 'god', not critersizing it just creeps me out a little. |
| by daltonlaffs @ 20 March 2008 05:47 pm |
| Not really getting most of the complaints against this page here... then again, I've never been the artistic type and can't put pencil to paper to save my life.
And a little bit of Japanese knowledge to inject: Yes, Haruko (as well as Haru) can be unisex. I'm not saying that it doesn't SOUND girly (nor am I denying that the average Japanese citizen would think it was a girl's name), but it's in at least 5 birthname dictionaries. However, I DO admit that Yasu looks a little bow-legged... must be a side effect of playing with the cameras. Same stuff happens when you try to draw an optical illusion from multiple perspectives, it tends to get all wonky. |