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| by treucko @ 31 January 2008 11:16 am |
| tgis is starting to get weird, i get the story and everything bu yasu is getting a little too blunt almost bitter. |
| by Jason @ 01 February 2008 05:13 pm |
| Yeah...it's tough to follow story webcomics sometimes because you only get page by page rather than scene by scene. Hopefully things will clear up...soon...
Nevertheless, page 74 is released. |
| by Sitrel @ 01 February 2008 06:58 pm |
| Honestly, I like the look on Yasu's face on panel two, it's awesome for some reason, anyhow, i'm glad you eached a decision, I wish you luck. |
| by Quill @ 02 February 2008 01:26 pm |
| I LOVE Yasu's face on the second panel. It just looks so... so... fiesty XD
Also I see the colouring's extremely good, and I can see that being one of the main features of the comic (I mean in feviews and the like). Anyways if you want a negative comment about the page then here you go: Yasu's face in the first panel (god yasu) is good, apart from the nose which is pointing waaay too far up and it's too high in the face (right between the eyes) It's sortof ironic, I'm giving out some advice on Manga while I can't actually draw it XD |
| by Loki Fenrisulf @ 02 February 2008 03:10 pm |
| I think the eyes of Yasu on the third panels are a little too open for the expression you seemed to be aiming for.
And once again Hakuro forgets everything... That's the third generation it happens to him... Wonder if Shino forgot everything with him again too... |
| by Dirge @ 03 February 2008 01:29 am |
| On the topic of your update day, you should either:
A) Make it easier on you and put it on Saturday or Sunday B) Put it on Wednesday *just my opinion* or C) Find a day that is most appealing to the reader, ex: Sunday for religious irony *or something* Thats my two cents. Keep up the great work dude! =) |
| by Hortaux @ 03 February 2008 09:13 am |
| I think it would be amusing and ironic for the update day to be a Sunday, but that's just my opinion. |
| by Alien Cicada @ 04 February 2008 03:31 pm |
| I would request the update on Monday or Friday, so that it better fits with the meetings of my evil, alien worshiping cult. Or perhaps just for no reason at all. Given my personality, who knows. |
| by huntress @ 05 February 2008 07:22 pm |
| Try a Tuesday or some day a lot of people don't update. Then more people will look at yours for an update. |
| by Miro @ 05 February 2008 09:13 pm |
| The new talk bubbles blend with the style, but I still liked the previous ones better. Talk bubbles usually don't "blend" (at least not in the comics I read). Thought bubbles, on the other hand, sometimes blend. |