Welcome to Project ROL, an online graphic novel. Please note that the story contains Biblical references that are NOT intended to offend any particular religious groups or persons.
| by Skite @ 19 December 2007 08:09 pm |
| Can't wait for the new page! Btw, why was the title changed? I personally like retribution more than ramification but I'm still wondering. ^^; |
| by Jason @ 21 December 2007 01:06 pm |
| The title changed because retribution makes more sense for the story than ratification.
And a new page is finally up. Sorry it took so long... |
| by Lia @ 22 December 2007 03:26 am |
| See, now HERE'S an anatomy problem. Why are her boobs so big and voluptuous when they were average sized in the previous page?
The previous page was pretty realistic as far as A/B cup sized boobs go, and now they've jumped up to about a D. I MUCH preffered the A/B cup size to be honest. |
| by Jason @ 22 December 2007 09:40 am |
| Ha, are they too large? They're still tiny compared to her head...By the way, the last page had anatomy problems because HER left shoulder (our right) was too high. If it were that high, her chest would also have to be slanted. Plus little problems with the knee that trailed her body.
Nevertheless, thank you for your comments. |
| by pretty_blossom @ 22 December 2007 11:51 am |
| OK - this costume is really not working for me - last page it was loose around the chestt and this page it's tight and clinging for no appearant reason. FYI - close don't cling like that at that angle (not unless her breasts are so large that they make a plataue when she isn't leaning forward).
On a positive note - I like the way their hair looks. |
| by Choko @ 22 December 2007 02:32 pm |
| they're not too big, they look fine. But the clothes look a bit weird, too tight... it looks more like paint directly over her skin.r
r The rest is fine :) I like what you've been doing lately with her hair. |
| by Skeith @ 24 December 2007 07:15 pm |
| Well I love the costume on Yasu, so I hope you don't change it! |
| by trombonefellow @ 24 December 2007 10:19 pm |
| I'm confused, didn't she just go through all that to save him in the first place? |
| by Wark @ 25 December 2007 08:13 pm |
| Yasu's costume is funky. :D I noticed that all of a sudden she has more eye makeup on this page than the previous one. :P |
| by OmniStrata @ 26 December 2007 07:59 am |
| Woot, some hot God on Savior action perhaps? ^_^ |
| by Jason @ 26 December 2007 07:17 pm |
| Thank you for all the comments. A new page should be up within two pages, now that I'm back from my little trip to Cali. Regarding God's clothing...um...I'll keep working on it until it looks better and has approval from at least half the readers >_> |
| by The Muffin Overlord @ 27 December 2007 09:20 am |
| wow...
um... Boobs. |
| by trombonefellow @ 29 December 2007 01:30 am |
| lol, after re-reading a few times I think I know what's going on now. |
| by Jason @ 29 December 2007 02:14 am |
| Good to hear, trombonefellow. I was going to respond to your comment, but I figured you were going to figure it out when I show both Yasu and God as separate characters on a future scene... |
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