Welcome to Project ROL, an online graphic novel. Please note that the story contains Biblical references that are NOT intended to offend any particular religious groups or persons.
| by bbr @ 14 December 2007 05:59 am |
| Deeply cut clevage, can't wait ! :P |
| by Jason @ 16 December 2007 11:29 pm |
| Ha, well I just released the page. Page 66 is finally up. Sorry for the delay...I wanted to get this out on Saturday/Sunday, but ended up backing it up to Monday -_- |
| by pretty blossom @ 17 December 2007 07:49 am |
| Nice page, any deterioration of quality isn't noticable.
I have an issue with the size of that last speech bubble: Is the fact that it's way too big for the text size meaningful? Is it a shout or a whisper? It looks like a shout (since all the text is capital letters, the online convention of capital letters = shout doesn't apply). If it's a shout, then it's not right for the sentiment. Should be a whisper there, but whispers are usually expressed in comics as smaller letters and not larger speach bubbles. If it's neither a shout or a whisper, and no other meaning attached to the size, then u should consider making it smaller. I know more speech bubbles equal less paining, but it looks weird. |
| by Jason @ 17 December 2007 10:57 am |
| Agreed. I was so caught up in the art, I forgot to check the dialogue with the page...so I drew the bubble too large. The last thing I do is add the text, so the bubble size was already set...and making it smaller after already painting everything else is a definite pain.
In short, this is a result of bad planning on my part. |
| by trombonefellow @ 17 December 2007 01:07 pm |
| I like the new color. |
| by Jason @ 17 December 2007 01:23 pm |
| Just went through and "evened" out the text so that the final bubble isn't as empty. The dialogue is the same. |
| by Lia @ 19 December 2007 05:04 pm |
| Whats the "anatomy" problems? Doesn't seem to be any kind of evident problem to me. |
| by pretty_blossom @ 22 December 2007 11:48 am |
| last bubble looks better.
One might hope you'd script the page before finishing painting, but looks like you don't work that way. Oh, well - just try to pay attention in the future. |
| by Jason @ 26 December 2007 10:42 pm |
| I do have it all finished...it's just that I didn't pay too much attention to is and messed up the bubble sizes. |
[RETURN TO TOP]
