Welcome to Project ROL, an online graphic novel. Please note that the story contains Biblical references that are NOT intended to offend any particular religious groups or persons.
| by Hortaux @ 14 December 2007 02:16 am |
| Panel three = absolute awesome. In my opinion, the best human figure-picture we've seen so far. |
| by megatorg @ 14 December 2007 06:51 am |
| truthfully I think this fuzziness works really well. He is just waking up after an incredibly major ordeal. Probably having trouble focusing right now...I know I would ;) |
| by Jason @ 14 December 2007 05:23 pm |
| Thanks for the comments. The fuzziness wasn't on purpose...that's just how it turned with this style...I suppose it is a bit blurry. I'll have to attempt to fix that up on future pages. |
| by pretty blossom @ 15 December 2007 05:19 am |
| I really dislike god's outfit - she looks like a slutty hobo, and the bad part is the hobo look. Red eyes are nice and creepy.
I love the 2nd panel - he looks so naive there. |
| by Kojiki @ 15 December 2007 10:12 am |
| Holy hell! I dont check for a few weeks and come back to what I reckon is the best page i've ever seen... Art is waaaay better. (thumbs up!) |
| by Wicked @ 15 December 2007 12:42 pm |
| My god - this looks great. You are certainly getting a great grasp of the colouring thing. The time is a problem, though; its something that will hardly ever change and I've been practicing it for a long while myself.
Hopefully the speed will increase because I agree that this is one of the best looking pages so far. Artwork improving = grabbing new readers. |
| by edcalaban @ 16 December 2007 10:16 pm |
| Looks beautiful. I kind of like how it blends more than it used too.
3rd panel is awesome. Keep it up. |
| by Me @ 16 December 2007 10:34 pm |
| Is god growing older as the story goes? It's a deep idea even if it was accidental. |
| by Jason @ 16 December 2007 11:13 pm |
| Thank you for all the comments, everyone. Sorry you don't like how God is looking right now, pretty_blossom...but I think her costume is the only one that will stay consistent throughout the story...
And at "Me"...God looking older is not accidental. |
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