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| by New Arrival @ 11 October 2007 01:21 pm |
| You cant do this to meeee :( i need this comic im so hooked that im ignoring lifes naccesities... such as my girlfriend, n thats sayin something!
YASU FTW |
| by Ameides @ 12 October 2007 02:58 pm |
| Whats wrong with the first and last panel? |
| by Jason @ 14 October 2007 02:25 am |
| Eh, just some minor proportion problems. Anyway, I fixed them up, and uploaded the colored version of this page. |
| by pretty_blossom @ 14 October 2007 04:22 am |
| nice page, but since when is 50% good odds? also - how do they figure out those odds in the 1st place?
Yasu looks pretty relieved to hear that it isn't certain death - I like the way she looks. |
| by Jason @ 14 October 2007 11:57 am |
| lol, you make a very valid point. I can't remember what drove me to make it 50-50. Looking back now, it seems like a rather silly thing for them to give a specific number - I'll go in and adjust the text later. |
| by Kojiki @ 14 October 2007 12:23 pm |
| You do get odds of survival based on how well the patient's body could survive the trauma of a surgery, but if its with nano-ma-whatsits then I dunno...
But I like it anyway, Drama!! I bet he doesnt even NEED their help, go Haruki! |
| by LoneHollow @ 14 October 2007 06:28 pm |
| Sweet, I can't wait to see how he reacts when he meets Yasu. X3 |
| by pretty_blossom @ 15 October 2007 03:56 am |
| new line sounds much better - this page is good |
| by Sky @ 15 October 2007 10:13 am |
| I would be releived at a 50/50 chance too if I thought the person was certainly DEAD!
Anyway, /love/ the eye job in panel one! So shiney... O_o |
| by Wicked @ 18 October 2007 02:40 pm |
| I bet Haruki is going to be pissed when he gets out.
Also the idea that there is something thats stopping them from continuing the operation is intriguing - maybe is has something to do with his status, or even the government's control over them? Whatever government there is, anyway. |
| by Jason @ 19 October 2007 01:47 am |
| By the way, sorry for taking so long on the next page. No guarantees, but I'll *try* to get a page up before late Sunday or Monday... |
| by That_Guy @ 21 October 2007 05:00 pm |
| Oops, have been too busy to post in here since last time and just read your response. And honestly how you feel when you open up your emotions to the entire world. You'll get a lot of compliments, but it seem to take 50 compliments to ease the pain of one bashing. When you let yourself be vulnerable and show your work, negativity never stops hurting. But to be honest....its Google, you can find ANYTHING on Google, You can find people who think Van Gogh is utter trash, on Google. So just brush 'em off. And since I've been reading I've never seen your TWC rank dip below 14-15 and its been in top 10 multiple times so I'm sure the 5,000 votes you have right now should tell you that your doing good work.
On to comic now I guess, wewt plot twits.....*cough* hooray for more depth, but even though there hasn't been many strips it would be easier for me to be engulfed in ROL if they had more personality. If you can ask a reader what any random character would do in any event completely unrelated to anything and they can give you a good answer that you are trying to convey, you've passed flawlessly. Right now all I have is scenarios for Yasu being backed up into a corner and not much else, I suppose it will all come when we have a solid storyline though. :D Cya next time. |
| by Jason @ 22 October 2007 01:22 am |
| Well, thanks for the encouragement That_Guy. And I also agree with you in regards to the lack of personality...I intend to build on characterization when the next "section" of the story begins (which is after this scene) |
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