Welcome to Project ROL, an online graphic novel. Please note that the story contains Biblical references that are NOT intended to offend any particular religious groups or persons.
| by Sandra @ 08 October 2007 04:45 pm |
| I can only say, wow, your art has really improved this last pages, the lines also look much better than the first pages. I've been roaming around, but I really had to leave a comment now. Your story has a nice Evangelion touch. Looking forward for more. |
| by Jason @ 09 October 2007 04:24 am |
| You're too kind Sandra. Thank you for the pleasant comment! I'll continue to work hard so I can keep improving |
| by New Arrival @ 09 October 2007 03:02 pm |
| Get these pages up your strips rok!!!!!!!!!
YASU FTW |
| by pretty_blossom @ 11 October 2007 03:01 am |
| I like ur style - it's unique.
BTW - I'm fine with a frequency of 1 page per month as long as u commit to it. noting bugs me more than a comic that disrespects the reader by promising more updates and then not delivering them. True - it take a few seconds to check up a website, but it's the honesty of the thing. |
| by That_Guy @ 11 October 2007 04:06 pm |
| Keep on going. You pulled of the 4th panel remarkably better than you probably would have in the past. You seem exited about your art and conveying the story so I'm looking forward to your leaps and bounds into all areas of this adventure. Even in typing its easy to tell empty promises and goals, but you're one of the more solid and dependable people in this field with a drive for improvement. I'll guess I'll be a loyal reader, eh?-- I'm not really gonna bash on some art quirks I have because thats your style, only thing is the arms in panel 1 might be better with elbows and a defined forearm and maybe bicep considering its bare skin. I'm no artist in anything but words though. |
| by Karretch @ 11 October 2007 04:44 pm |
| I'll have you know that art is not what all people look for in a webcomic. The very first I read is a sprite comic using the original Metroid sprites. Also, I tend to look at the story of a comic and not care how the art looks as long as the story catches my interest. So don't think that all people look for in a webcomic is good art, 'cause it's not true. Just be your self and do ROL how you want to. |
| by Jason @ 11 October 2007 04:56 pm |
| @pretty_blossom, New Arrival, That_Guy: Such flattering comments, thank you. I admit I was very happy after reading That_Guy's comment. But then I found on Google a few random forum topics (from various sites) badmouthing Project ROL...so the happy mood kinda dissipated...immediately... @Karretch: I agree that people may not be specifically looking for art in a comic...but usually if the art style doesn't appeal to a person, (s)he wouldn't bother searching for the first page and reading from the start. Currently, I'm more confident that my story will keep readers hooked than my drawing...so I'm working hard to make the visual aspects more appealling. |
| by Kojiki @ 12 October 2007 11:14 am |
| Wooo! Good faces! And don't worry too much 'bout maintaining a story/art ratio. Its not like every sentence in a book is pertinant to the plot, occasionally you need to explain what's going on or where people are with big artsy shots rather than with dialogue. |
| by Ameides @ 12 October 2007 02:54 pm |
| Nice improvements ont eh art, etc. I agree with you on the impact of the art to new readers, but you have to take into consideration that the current readers wont stick around just for art. No point getting new one if they dont stick around! ;p I guess its just that whole balance thing though... >.< |
| by Jason @ 28 October 2007 04:41 am |
| Well, thanks for the comments. I'll keep in mind to maintain a certain balance I suppose... |
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