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| by Tom @ 17 August 2007 03:50 am |
| I found it a bit peculiar but I guess the same can be said for angels in general. |
| by Jiki @ 17 August 2007 12:14 pm |
| The boy looks weird on the 3. panel. oO |
| by pretty_blossom @ 17 August 2007 01:28 pm |
| The last pannel is off - what were u trying to do - show that the angel is reaching to him from 1st person perspective? it doesn't look like a hand, or even an angel's hand.
plot-wise - "behind u, an angel" is a really silly thing to say in the sircumstances. There's a giant monster that landed noisily next to him, he would have noticed, and if not then he wouldn't really notice her warning either way. No talking - just an action - get the innocent human out of the way or attack the angel or run for ur life. Any other option could be lethal. |
| by Kky @ 17 August 2007 02:26 pm |
| Umm. Just wanted to say, I love your work. Only thing I don't like is how you sorta leave things hanging in the stories lol. Course I understand that's sorta the point. Besides. I'm not the author, that's you, and never let anyone tell you what to do. Do this for you. The fact that others enjoy it will just be frosting on the cake. Never change the style for others. ^^ |
| by Karretch @ 17 August 2007 06:42 pm |
| I think the problem with the hand in the last problem is that the thumb seems to be on the wrong side. |
| by Matt V. 3.0 @ 17 August 2007 10:48 pm |
| Pretty_blossom, I feel the need to point out that in life-or-death situations, not everyone goes "Gee, I'd better make sure that what I'm saying isn't stupid!" It's natural for people to point out the obvious, especially when theyy're in danger and shock. |
| by Tom @ 18 August 2007 02:18 pm |
| Besides now she's making a habit out of it with the warning about how he's running into a battle field and all. Saying stupid things keeps us human, |
| by Reedz @ 18 August 2007 06:53 pm |
| Looks great so far ^^
Just wondering, is the angel trying to scoop him up and attack him, or is it really asking "are you being picked on?" Sorry, I know it sounds silly, but the 'dear chikd' kinda threw me off O_o |
| by That Guy @ 19 August 2007 01:35 pm |
| Nice final panel, right when the page uploaded I thought ' Woah, claw in my face!'......and thats all I have to say due to me having to go to work. |
| by Kojiki @ 19 August 2007 01:52 pm |
| Good work as always, also interesting to see the plot twisting like a rattle-snake ^_^. And the angle looks brilliant, by the way, not rushed at all. |
| by Tom @ 19 August 2007 03:09 pm |
| I'm not sure if the new dialogue makes more sense, beforehand it fit with the whole human "isn't the weather lovely" and "Are you okay?" habit. But didn't she know she was running into a battlefield? So wouldn't she expect one to turn up? I'm probably just being picky. |
| by Sean @ 19 August 2007 05:25 pm |
| I wonder if the kid has any powers that would just rip apart that Angel. |
| by Mari @ 19 August 2007 09:34 pm |
| Wow, I really like your comic, and your style. I was a bit confused about the whole angel thing, but then again I'm almost always confused. ^^ Anyway, keep up the work and I hope to see a lot more from you! |
| by pretty_blossom @ 20 August 2007 01:09 am |
| why does it suddenly sem as if Hakuro is part of the design team for the angels? "lovely angel" indeed...
BTW - Yasu's line is still not right. She might have said something like "****, an angel!" - short and to the point. Personally I'd try to back away quietly before the thing notices me, but I'd probably not be the 1st line of defence. The angel's thumb is still the wrong way around. |
| by a guy named Bob @ 20 August 2007 01:10 pm |
| The angel looks kick-@$$, the boy looks kick-@$$, the girl looks kick @$$.
This comic is such a cliffhanger |
| by Jason @ 21 August 2007 10:50 am |
| Thanks to Bob, Mari, Reedz, Kky and any other new readers I may have missed. It's always nice to hear from your readers rather than just assuming that they're just...there somewhere. And I give up on Yasu and her text bubble there. I'd rid of the bubble entirely since her expression is probably suffice, but since it's inked, I can't turn back unless I redraw the entire thing. |
| by Soar @ 21 August 2007 03:02 pm |
| This comic is awsome. When's the next bit gonna be up? |
| by Delphian @ 22 August 2007 02:32 am |
| Since you like hearing about new readers, I want to say I saw your comic about a week ago and I was immediately attracted to it, mostly by the storyline. I'm fascinated that in heaven, Yasu was God and had the upper hand, whereas in present time, Hakuro seems much more omnipotent. Anyway, can't wait for more updates ^_^
And about the speech bubble, the current one makes sense to me, if you emphasize *now?* so that it's a sort of under-your-breath rhetorical question. |
| by Jason @ 22 August 2007 08:45 am |
| @Soar: Um...new pages should be up by Saturday...but that depends on my free time
And hurray for even more new members who actually read the comments =P |
| by Kierin @ 23 August 2007 03:29 pm |
| Some of the earlier comics implied that she's not fully battlefield ready/trained, so I wouldn't worry too much about her reaction not "making sense." Helps demonstrate her confusion with the situation. Like someone pointed out: he would have heard/felt the angel coming, so would likely have run but isn't. Definitely adds to the conflict of "oh, crap!" and "wtf?!?".
For the perspective in the last panel: it's good that it jumps out at me, but I sometimes lose it because the claw blends into the color and texture of the leg/body below it. |
| by ^.^ @ 23 August 2007 04:37 pm |
| I'm liking it so far. =] Looking forward to the next pages.
o_O I found it all fairly decent to follow. *shrugs* Either way keep it up. ^^" /newreadertoo/ |
| by Sean @ 23 August 2007 11:47 pm |
| yeah it's gonna be a blast... so are the angels the enemies? I'm sort of not following. |
| by Jason @ 24 August 2007 08:55 am |
| Just as a note...I'm going to be late for the next update, so sorry...class just started this week and it's been a rather hectic start (usually first weeks are easy...) |
| by gromire @ 25 August 2007 00:13 am |
| i think the elder angel is buetiful like line art or mabey a bowl of spegeti though i have no clue how spegeti can be artistic. |
| by Delphian @ 27 August 2007 10:59 am |
| @Sean I get the feeling that angels are the divine...cleansers, basically, tasked with wiping out humanity (or maybe as implied in the discussion, simply doing it for fun). Then again I might learn more by reading ROL? |
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