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| by pretty_blossom @ 10 July 2007 02:39 am |
| lack of mouth seems the big problem to me. |
| by Brunosius @ 10 July 2007 02:45 am |
| Perhaps the mouth is too high to his nose. If you shift it down his face, it may look better. |
| by Hortaux @ 10 July 2007 10:06 am |
| In my opinion... your guy's mouth is slightly too high and it makes the entire face seem squashed. >_<'''' |
| by Karretch @ 10 July 2007 10:36 am |
| I think what's wrong is that his face is the lack of urgency to evacuate the people |
| by shadowclasper @ 11 July 2007 05:24 am |
| OOOOH, so that's what was going on...
and his face just look sleepy, not worried, though she looks approriate consdiering the conversation she just had. |
| by Chameleon @ 11 July 2007 01:06 pm |
| hey.... love the comic (I know.. not on this page ;-)~ )... I think whats wrong is that his mouth isn't open wide enough... if it was opened a bit more (down towards his chin) it would look more like he was yelling at her to move it.... her expression is perfect ;) |
| by Jason @ 12 July 2007 05:12 pm |
| Wow thanks for all the comments, everyone. I'm amused at how many different people are posting comments nowadays compared to the three regular commenters when I first started.
Nevertheless, I think the face is wrong due to bad placement of the whole face (eyes need to be higher, mouth lower). In two pages, you'll see a better looking version of his face. |
| by Ninja Guy @ 13 July 2007 05:14 pm |
| The face looks like it needs to be a bit rounder, towards the bottom-left. It's a straight line.. Almost.
Maybe a bit more of an angle would work, but most of the previous things would too. |
| by i @ 25 January 2008 07:20 am |
| girl: nose job
boy: chin and cheek... other it's goooood |
| by Jason @ 25 January 2008 07:29 pm |
| Yeah, there are a lot of problems here and there. Looking back now (half a year later)...these pages really do look bad XD |
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