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| by pretty_blossom @ 28 June 2007 12:51 pm |
| forth panel - yasu's left eye looks weird - the hair should be totally covering par of it, and it shouldn't look brighter than the right eye.
As for the content - oooh - phylosophical debate - my favorite... |
| by Jason @ 28 June 2007 01:13 pm |
| True...that eye probably shouldn't be able to go through that lock of hair... A silly mistake on my part. I can't remember what I was thinking back then, but I'm guessing that I was working on the eyes and just thought "why not?"
And I hope I make this "philosophical debate" decent and logically structured...or else I have a feeling I'm going to get a lot of long comments and emails from readers. Then again, that's what makes it fun |
| by LunarGoddess @ 28 June 2007 05:49 pm |
| I just started reading your comic and so far I think that it is awesome. The art is really good. I can't wait until the next update. |
| by Jason @ 28 June 2007 06:10 pm |
| THank you very much! Love hearing from new readers ^_^ Hope I don't disappoint you |
| by Matt V. 3.0 @ 28 June 2007 06:23 pm |
| So glad I started reading this. |
| by Boris @ 28 June 2007 07:07 pm |
| Great comic...I was about to dump the comic since I'm not into manga, but i began to read and your hook took my lip.
Your dialog is smart and the ideas behind them are very imaginative. |
| by Ameides @ 28 June 2007 11:12 pm |
| Wow. I feel kinda old. And I havent even been reading that long, it must have been... towards the end of gen3 I began???
Yays for debates! Youre probably going to end up with long comments anyway. Hm. Id say it wasnt a matter of 'angels cant kill humans', its more like 'we dont wanna diiiieeee!!! ;_;' |
| by Jason @ 29 June 2007 05:58 pm |
| @Matt: I'm glad you started reading this too @Boris: Really...I'm surprised I was actually able to convince an anti-manga reader to accept my piece...my art style is clearly influenced by the Japanese manga. @Ameides: Don't think of it as "old"...think of it as wise and experienced. |
| by Quill @ 30 June 2007 02:52 pm |
| I'm starting to love the colouring. I think the shading (I mean the shadow sading) is a bit too exaggerated, as Blossom said. The shadow onto the eye is a bit too exagerated.
Ameides: You think you feel old? I was reading since near the beginning of Generation 1! |
| by Ameides @ 01 July 2007 00:38 am |
| Quill: Ahh... Gen 1... *flashbacks... again* Whoa! Gen 1! In the ROL timline, you outdate the dinosaurs and the micro-organisms and the creation of the solar system! Youre right up against the Big Bang! Tell me, what was the singularity like?
Jason: Oooo! Can I hit people with my walking stick? And complain about how I fought for the country and how rude everybody is??? Hm.. more coffee! *bad idea - is already hyper* |
| by Quill @ 01 July 2007 06:20 am |
| @Ameides: It was very boring ^_^ |
| by Loki Fenrisulf @ 03 July 2007 04:00 pm |
| Boring and hurt the eyes. Don't forget to hell him it hurt the eyes!
Specially that ice on the first pages that never showed up again (I really thought it would)... |