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Alright, couple things about this page. I don't think I did a good job on expressing the correct emotions here. She is surprised in the first panel by the question. Then on the second panel, she looks down as if upset or saddened. And finally, she looks up towards the odd mosaic -- I like to imagine her with her eyes closed as if absorbing the moment.

Perhaps this signifies that the girl actually doesn't really hate the boy...because she seems affected when he can't remember who she is. Heh, key word: 'perhaps'.

And the bottom background is all wrong perspectively. I clearly didn't do as good of a job on it the second time around. I think it's a tad too obvious that I was trying to copy the first page...
11 June 2007 by Jason LaiLeave a Comment (5)

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