Some of the lines look icky. I think they became broken when I had to resize some of the images to fit into this page. I mean, the drawing itself didn't have bad lines...or at least it wasn't nearly as obvious.

And the boy finally speaks. Took him long enough. What page is this? Seven? He took five to six pages of bad-mouthing from the girl...

Last but not least, I tried a new pose for the boy on the final panel. It looks good except there's a hole between his arms and his body. I'm still not very sure, but I think his torso should overlap that gap (which I obviously didn't draw)...