There we go; the artwork gets better again! In case you didn't notice, that last page sucked artistically, specifically the girl's drawing.

I've actually gotten better at drawing small images (objects from a distance). I didn't practice it or anything...it just happened. I suppose it's due to the fact that I'm trying to draw my characters from the different perspectives to give off a more diverse look.

A little problem I noticed though...the girl and boy looks older than they should be on the last few pages. I'm not very talented at portraying children without an adult around to place the kids to scale. I mean, if I had an adult standing next to the girl, it would be obvious that she's short. However, since the only other character is also a kid, it's hard to tell they're children with my poorly setup proportions...