I made some mistakes proportion-wise on the final panel with the girl's face at a slant. It was surprisingly difficult drawing the head slanted. Also, I think the girl's dress is a tad too revealing at times...plus the location of her private parts sometimes seem unnatural since it is hidden despite even though the slit on the dress was supposed to reveal that part of her body...

One of these days I have to make set locations for the slits on her dress. At this moment I just draw its location on the costume randomly...