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I think perhaps her (Yasu's) costume is a bit too bright. Anyway, with the little hair on the first panel, I think we can all (despite whether or not you read my previous graphic novels) guess who Yasu is. I probably should have cut off at a lower part of her neck so that I didn't have to include the hair...
Nevertheless, Yasu's costume is original. The guy in the green suit isn't. I kind of stole that off somewhere and made it green instead of dark blue. I just wanted formal wear to show that this guy has some authority. Whether or not he appears again after this scene is questionable since he isn't a major character (that's why I didn't bother giving him an original costume).
What else? Now we know that neurosynchronization includes bounding with someone. That word sounds funny. Should it have been binding with someone? Maybe I should go in and change that it to bind instead of bound...damn, I'm so confused. Doesn't those two mean the same? What's the difference?